
carefully
the land dangles charms
sprinkles pearls, bees, birds
sound answers, tugs beasts
and buds forth to birth ; churns
of complexity ; bursts
of simplicity ; betrayed
roil of restless
cobweb -dreams escape
to wake
for rapture
.
only creatures
see empty bounty
a season of plenty, so
a season of menace for
those whose treasure must be exposed
that freshest wet innocence brought forth
in inexorable trust , hunted
again.
.
not a haiku
.
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NaPoWriMo day 6 prompt : to write a variation of an acrostic poem. But rather than spelling out a word with the first letters of each line, I’d like you to write a poem that reproduces a phrase with the first words of each line. Perhaps you could write a poem in which the first words of each line, read together, reproduce a treasured line of poetry? You could even try using a newspaper headline or something from a magazine article.
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Pps
in hindsight, i think i may have misread the prompt… oops twice!
P.s you will find the poem chosen (at random) below . I copied down the first words and avoided reading the poem so that I would not be influenced. I did, however count the words in each of her lines and kept the same in my own poem ( there is one line longer though , oops ( poetic licence?))
Poem chosen:
Late October by Maya Angelou
.
Carefully
the leaves of autumn
sprinkle down the tinny
sound of little dyings
and skies sated
and roseate sunsets
roil ceaselessly in
cobweb greys and turns
to black
for comfort
.
Only lovers
see the fall
a signal end to endings
a gruffish gesture alerting
those who will not be alarmed
that we begin to stop
in order to begin
again.
no, no, I don’t think you misread anything. This is the work of an artist sitting and doing the work. Tremendous work. Loved all your lines, Barbara. I felt as if you loan me a string of pearls to wear as I read. Honest, that’s how this felt to me. And I, in my PJs felt elegant. Thanks for giving me this moment. I bless you. Happy writing.
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If there be pearls, take them as a gift, as they are meant. Blessèd be.
Yours in gratitude for your gracious words
btw
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It´s beautiful. 🙂
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Thank you so much 💗🙏
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wonderful poem
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Thank you so much, K
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