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like a river i hold close in my arms, my body
your run through me — a quiver
of arrows and slings stroke my limbs, my mind
like stars plucked for your eyes to startle me
a name stammered and chimed — a sound
surrounds — a kind of grace escapes
.
i’ve lain down in moonlit thoughts of you
awoke to the sun of your skin and fingers
taunting the morning with stolen scents —
of your breath as breakfast, love
of murmurs of bees stirring my hair
a dapple of flowers gathering
over a slither of summer heather
over darkened hills, a moan, a chill
a gasp of lemon-dazzle glints blackening
the shiny stones of you blinding
me to other
worlds
other landscapes
other loves
drowned out
.
this is my sorrow, my secret, my dove
the rain in my mouth announces it
no other
hears it
as happiness
swallows
.
not a haiku
.
NapoWriMo day 10 :- write a love poem
Wow: “i’ve lain down in moonlit thoughts of you/ awoke to the sun of your skin and fingers” Just wow.
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Beautiful, Barbara! 💕🙂
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Thank you , honey
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Ooo I love it. So many great lines and images 👍👍
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You warm my heart! Thank you
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Loved each line! i’ve lain down – awoke to scent….Marvelous!
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Thank you for taking the time to leave me a line 🙏
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So many beautiful lines, Barbara! Here are some of my favorite: “over a slither of summer heather / over darkened hills, a moan, a chill,” and “this is my sorrow, my secret, my dove / the rain in my mouth announces it.” Glorious!💜🍃
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Mirroring of my words is a huge accolade . Grazi Mille
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Wish I had wrote this 😍
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Huge affirmation. Thank you
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