Give me —
five fists full of summer grass
without uprooting anything at all
Offer me —
six swift licks of your herby skies
including denuded scented rainflies
Pick the —
arch of your mouth out of the earth
pulling up a brace of this yellow birds —
you know are my favourite treats
give them a sprinkle of rose water and thyme twists to enliven them
Release breezes —
of them to me, sweetness
Christen my skin
with unbearable brightness
i can bear
and i shall
climb the concrete of your seven towers
my limbs shedding strips of your shaggy shapes
that coat you like smoke
as i go
to kiss the gossamer of your scars
as i bestow
upon you the broths of my belly
cover you in my darkest berries
catch you falling in
the parachute of my hair
.
not a haiku
.
NaPoWriMo prompt April 19:-
write a poem that starts with a command. It could be as uncomplicated as “Look,” as plaintive as “Come back,” or as silly as “Don’t you even think about putting that hot sauce in your hair.” Whatever command you choose, I hope you have fun ordering your readers around.
Happy birthday, Barbara! Lovely poetry 💕🙂
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Thank you so much Harmony.
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Such a sweet summer poem! Happy Birthday, Barbara! Really enjoyed your poetry.
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You are too kind. 🙏🥰
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This made me think of the lover’s impossible commands in the folk tune “Scarborough Fair”. Lovely.
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What a compliment. Thank you Xan
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Woot those “six swift licks of your herby skies” and HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!
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Thanks and thanks!
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This poem is like catnip for poets. I’m head over heels with “Offer me — / six swift licks of your herby skies / including denuded scented rainflies.” Happy Birthday, dear Barbara!🎉💜💫
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Yay!! Love your comment.
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😘
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Christen my skin with unbearable brightness / sending sunny wishes to brighten your birthday
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It was indeed a bright, sunny day. Thank you, Gloria💗
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It was a bright, sunny day. Thank you, Gloria 💗
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Happy Birthday Barbara. Thank you for this ‘gossamer’ treat. I hope your special day is as magical as you made my moments of reading your poetry.
This “catch you falling in the parachute of my hair” feels safe, secure–cosy like a womb. Love it.
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What a lovely comment and birthday treat. Thank you so much for reading and for writing to me. Most happily received, Art. 🙏💗
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