

.
i dream i’m drowning
it’s an old one
but it no longer owns me
now i’ve come home to avalon
.
thoughts of rain awake me
the lady comes again for me
from across the levels blurred in
a banging of silver bangles
a breathing womb of grass and apples
a trembling of limbs still stuck in the suck
of muck-moist land that’s been drained for ages
until it rains; and it rains
.
she is ages older than me, yet young
she speaks an older tongue, voice
fizzy with dialects of scrumpy cider and musky crusts of ancient cheddar
echoes dance from dank chalk caves
wassail wassail wassail
and so it was
and so it is
.
i dream her lovely face
etched upon a sorrow of cloud
heavy as half a pound of moonlight
light as a fragrance of lemoncakes
i dream her silken garments
and steely armaments
reflected in the ancient lakes of this summer land
do you see me, she rasps
swirling me in underwater loves
she drags me to her breast where i rest
kisses the stone of my bones
unheeding of the summons of Merlin
defiantly ungifting trinkets to the kings
the legend of the lady
awaits a feminist twist
shhhh, she whispers, coming
and i dream myself asleep
.
not a haiku
.
ps
I moved the the isle of ancient avalon last year. Do you know where that is? Quite simply, Somerset in the West Country of the UK, near Glastonbury. I felt a pull to come here and so here am i. Still dreaming…
NaPoWriMo day 25
prompt is based on the aisling, a poetic form that developed in Ireland. An aisling recounts a dream or vision featuring a woman who represents the land or country on/in which the poet lives, and who speaks to the poet about it. Today, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that recounts a dream or vision, and in which a woman appears who represents or reflects the area in which you live. Perhaps she will be the Madonna of the Traffic Lights, or the Mysterious Spirit of Bus Stops. Or maybe you will be addressed by the Lost Lady of the Stony Coves. Whatever form your dream-visitor takes, happy writing!
The isle of Avalon, that watery place. Nicely done! Butterfly 😊
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The Lady of Shalott by Alfred Tennyson came to mind as I floated down your dream. Floaty Feminist:) It must be a sign that I’m hungry for this spoke to me: “fizzy with dialects of scrumpy cider and musky crusts of ancient cheddar”
Your piece also took me into the caves of Cheddar Gorge. I reckon it’s the quality of your writing that’s doing this magic. Thank you.
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How throughly delightful to have woken this morning to your comment.
I would happily speak those words to you….
Thank you thank you
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“a breathing womb of grass and apples/a trembling of limbs still stuck in the suck/
of muck-moist land that’s been drained for ages” — just perfect. I get it. Exactly.
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It was the peat, wasn’t it?!
Glad you got it. Did it get it right?
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peat/birth yup!
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Extremely well-flowing and well-kept in check. Enjoyed it immensely.
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Thank you so much, Manja
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Oh, here is the poem !
Thank you 🙏
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Thank you for this wonderful poem. I hope you don’t mind if I borrowed a verse from it for my yesterday’s cento, with gratitude:
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Wonderful poem, Manja.
I was flattered that you would you one of my lines, then realized that you hadn’t. Doesn’t matter. Still appreciated the sentiment meant
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Ahh!! You didn’t recognise it? 😉 Maybe you stopped reading before the end…
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Hi Manja
I found it on another post. 🙏🙏
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Another post? Your last line of this poem is the last line of my cento. 🙂 Were you reading another poem?
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I went here first and didn’t see my name on the list of poets
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But you’ve been always on the list. 🙂 Number 24.
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